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Ann-5hrs18min-7-26-09

This is a video with audio, not just an animated gif.
CLICK THIS LINK TO VIEW IT:

☞ [link] ☜

Thanks go to Vickeh yet again for the splendid voice-acting!:heart:

If your browser can't play the above link, try this: [link]


I'm still accepting more clips from voice actresses for Ann, Frisk, or Lilith!
Ann: [link]
Frisk or Lilith: [link]
(And one crazy idea I got, in case you're short on ideas, is that I'd like to try animating a bit of singing!)
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Critique by ~katez-chan Jul 28, 2009, 4:33:27 PM
This is a nice animation, it's very cute and well-drawn. Just a couple of things though-- It's a little jerky on a minute level, and the way lines seem to appear and disappear at random doesn't help. you might try to be more consistent with the placing of your lines, and if you use Onion Skin try to exactly trace as many lines as possible. Also the way her arms suddenly spring out from her body is a bit weird, you might try using action lines like you did when she sweeps her hand outward, because that looked really good.
Her hair is also fantastic. The movement and the way it fluffs up and reacts to her movements is so realistic. Especially the way it sweeps outward. The shape of her eyes is a bit off though, it makes her facial expression look more sad than angry or frustrated. It's kind of an incongruous expression, with the eyebrows showing anger and the eyes conveying sadness or tiredness.
Well, hope this helps in future.
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~NokyoOkami Feb 3, 2013   Traditional Artist
Wow You are an Amazing animator Good Job! :iconrikkavplz:
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~KarateCat211 Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Especially the one with audio!
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~xBlackdrake-Taurenx Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta say, your animation is lovely, I wish I could animate things cleanly xD
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~vinegarice Jul 11, 2012
nice...
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~Ca11m3Raven May 15, 2012  Student Artist
Woo woo!
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Mood: Cheerful ~Aykoll Apr 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wauu >.< cool cool
I love,

that your program makes the gif?

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~DrawUsCloser Apr 19, 2012   Digital Artist
I draw each frame by hand, scan them in, make them into an animated gif in Adobe Photoshop CS3, using the Animation window, then put the animated gif into Adobe After Effects CS3, add the audio, if need be, and then export the compilation into a .mov file=)
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Mood: Cheerful ~Aykoll Apr 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Woou
thanks for the info

super thanks

I love your drawing
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~SpiritLion16 Mar 5, 2012  Student Artist
can you make basic how to draw the difference between the male and female body and aslo draw the difference hair stlye like wavy, straight, and Curly in naruto stlye please?
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~DrawUsCloser Mar 5, 2012   Digital Artist
i do have this how-to-draw-girls tutorial :) [link]
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